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Fashion Advert for Uni Feedback Needed

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As the title says, genuinely looking for good critique!!!
Critique on the photography as well as the photoshop edit.

All elements copyright @ Kimberley Fritz 2016
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3508x2480px 7.9 MB
© 2016 - 2024 todo-mahem
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This is a very cool image! You've captured the gritty urban style very well, and it does not seem over processed or trite. your processing of the brickwork is effective, and draws attention to the model.
In my opinion I would give this a tighter crop, while I understand the negative space on the left is for the brand, I feel there is too much. the graffiti art on the left is effective in providing a border and leading lines to the image, however I feel that too much is included.
I wonder how this would look if shot on a flat angle, instead of slightly below. It may be that this is a far more effective way of shooting, but I would be curious to see the differences.
All in all a very effective image, and you're doing well with your experimention