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I see her cry, when he walks away,
She dries her eyes and says... I'm ok.
She turns around and hides her face,
She dries her eyes to hide disgrace.

She's not ok.

She says I don't love you anymore,
when she leaves he falls to the floor.
the pain of his heart he tries to hide,
I'm ok, he says, though not inside.

He's not ok.

I mask my tears and my pain,
I hide the hurt and ignore the strain.
I'm ok, I tell myself.
and take my troubles and put them on a shelf.

I'm not ok.

Lying in a world of pain,
nothing changes if it all stays the same.
I admit fine.. I'm not ok..
I wont be alive if i stay this way..

Maybe I will be ok...

I take the first step and admit it all,
I will be ok, if I stand up when I fall.
I smile and think what a fool I have been,
How different it could have been, if I had seen,
That I wasn't ok.

I'll be ok.
©2008-2009 =todo-mahem
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Author's Comments

:) Its a simplistic ideal, but a true one none the less. If people were to actually realise that they're not ok, I wonder if they'd be better off?


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I'm totally speechless, i love this poem.
Makes sense, and i can understand completely!

Beautiful Job!!
:icontodo-mahem:
^^ thankyou! i actually like this one to... its more .. um.. real? :hug: thanx again

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-if you live your life in fear of death.. then you do not live, for as humans we are given the gift of knowing that we will someday die, which makes life all the more worthwhile.-
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this is fantastic :D keep it up
:icontodo-mahem:
:hug: y thank you! ^^ will do ;P

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-if you live your life in fear of death.. then you do not live, for as humans we are given the gift of knowing that we will someday die, which makes life all the more worthwhile.-
:icontodo-mahem:
:glomp: ahehe.. gota love emoticons! ^^
:D

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-if you live your life in fear of death.. then you do not live, for as humans we are given the gift of knowing that we will someday die, which makes life all the more worthwhile.-
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what a great poem ^.^ i love it XD

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:icontodo-mahem:
^^ thanx! ;P

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-if you live your life in fear of death.. then you do not live, for as humans we are given the gift of knowing that we will someday die, which makes life all the more worthwhile.-

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