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Storm of Emotions

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Storm of emotions. </b>



BANG went the thunder,
As I poured out my fears.
Down came the rain,
As I poured out my tears.

And man, did it hail,
When I poured out my heart.
Guess I’d held that back,
Right from the start.

I felt the sand storm,
On the empty desert plain,
And cringed when it hit me,
When I poured out my pain.

I shook as the wind howled,
When I lost all control.
But it was incredibly silent,
When I poured out my soul.

The storm of emotions,
Wilder each time.
Tears on my heart strings,
Invading what’s mine.

Then calm settles in,
I relax unrestrained.
To quiet, to peaceful…
Then the storm comes again.
Now, this poem I like :D

It came so easily, and at the same time, hard. ;_; confusing ne?

meh, enjoy/ comment plz ^-^


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jtcheney's avatar
I like this poem, but I have to ask a question.
In the end of this poem: i read "To quiet, to peaceful..." but my brain interprests "Too quiet, too peaceful..." because of the flow of the rest of the poems. So is this just a grammatical mistake in your head, or a wiring problem in mine?

As "to", it makes sense, so please don't think I'm trolling for grammer, but when I read poetry i hear it too, so the "to" "too" shines through in minds eye.